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RE: Patience: My Entry for Mizu No Oto... Edition #31 [ENG]
Welcome to Mizu No Oto!
I like your haiku, I think it meets many of the poetical requirements: kigo, kireji, sabi, mono no aware and karumi too, because the lexicon is plain and common
Thank you! I tried to accomplish as many requirements as I could and I gotta say it was hard but fun at the same time. Thanks for your comments and for this initiative.