@angelro, lovely haiku! It certainly qualifies as a haiku, as a free style one.
If you going for the 5-7-5 arrangement, check the 2nd line...
Sweet in the world of romance
Sweet + in + world + of + ro + mance = 6 syllables. Remember syllable changes at the change of sound.
try something like -
As + we + ro + mance + the + sweet + world = 7 syllables
Thanks a lot my friend... In fact it is a confidence boosting reply which makes me to ponder more about such stuffs.
And regarding the numbers and syllables, let me share my secret. While googling to know more about Haiku I came across few sites that simply gives the statistics once you type the lines. I will give you the link tomorro from office,
But thanks for noticing the errors, I will be more careful.
@angelro - I have to watch these errors too, sometimes I make them as well.
I am happy with that because i know u must be right most of the time and I welcome thoze review from d heart
Yes @angelro, straight from the heart, my friend!