Original Haiku #12 - Affinitas (かんけい)

in #haiku6 years ago (edited)

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"affinitas"

lovely porcelain
shattered pieces everywhere
now drowning in vain

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Original Haiku By : @memeitbaby



Well That's a wrap for now thanks for reading. If you do like it just leave an upvote and comment below.
i'll be glad if i see comments cause i knew i didn't fail to create a good Haiku.

My Other Original Haiku:
Original Haiku #1 -"The Night"
Original Haiku #2 -"Little One"
Original Haiku #3 -"The War"
Original Haiku #4 -"Old Branch"
Original Haiku #5 -"Winter"
Original Haiku #6 -"La Luna"
Original Haiku #7 - "Burgeon"
Original Haiku #8 - "Peroration"
Original Haiku #9 - "Supervīvere"
Original Haiku #10 -"Heiwa"
Original Haiku #11 - "Death"



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Full of emotions!

Truth is, I really admire how you love Haiku. It is one of the areas in writing which truly challenges me. You are getting better and I am happy you found your niche bunso!

PS: Wala na akong utang ha.

Haha .. salamat po :D Haha opo wala na ^^

I was convinced to upvote this! Joke lang. You make beautiful Haiku. I feel sad that you intentionally broke a vase for this post though. Joke lang din. But continue on what you do best! :D

Haha .. iba din ee haha .. niliteral ung pagbasag 😂 yeah .. salamat po boss !

Basta upvote ko lagi to.. haha ako kanang kamay nito :D hahaha
Sayo na nakatatak yang haiku na yan.. hahaha Very Nice..

Haha ! Sama ka magbasag ng porcelain 😂😂 salamat sa upvote !

Siguro kapag mga ref na topic mo.. or TV.. Yun samahan kita magbasag.. hahaha

You're getting good at this kid. I think I'll take this as a challenge. I love challenges. Good job @memeitbaby. Upvoted.

Awesome haiku. From the title to poem content, amazing!
Very clever title - both Japanese and Latin? Good job.

Thanks ! yes that is right :) iv'e purposely put a latin word for the title to make it more aesthetic and be informative at the same time :D

I am happy that you are going for a certain niche and will support you always man,

It's no joke making a haiku

I'm happy to have a great friend/mentor and a great writer too all at once :D
thanks sir :D

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