Original Haiku #10 - Heiwa (へいわ)
the tranquil night has emerged
rest now heavy eyes
i'll be glad if i see comments cause i knew i didn't fail to create a good Haiku.
My Other Original Haiku:
Original Haiku #1 -"The Night"
Original Haiku #2 -"Little One"
Original Haiku #3 -"The War"
Original Haiku #4 -"Old Branch"
Original Haiku #5 -"Winter"
Original Haiku #6 -"La Luna"
Original Haiku #7 - "Burgeon"
Original Haiku #8 - "Peroration"
Original Haiku #9 - "Supervīvere"
Hi @memeitbaby! I can imagine sleeping near the beach..with the fresh wind and the sound of the waves calming your thought-overloaded mind..
Thank you for your kind words :) yes indeed .. i did make this haiku when im feeling asleep that's why its meaning is like that .. hehe :) thanks again
I also had the same feeling with this haiku..
Wooww magic
Thanks .. im using the magic of haiku ..
Upvoted bro dahil sa sipag mo sa discord! Apir👌👌👌 Ganda rin mga gawa mo sa haiku! Nice!👏👏👏
Haha .. thanks ate livsky 😂 tambay ako dun ee .. tamlay sa fb walang kakulitan 😂😂 salamat sa compliment kahit alam kong pinapalakas mo lang loob ko 😭😭😂😂
Dahil sa sipag sa discord. Hahaha spot on ka dun sis. Lol! Pero kidding aside, humuhusay si bunso sa haiku nya.
Haha .. pareho kayo mga ate ee .. pinapalakas nyo loob ko :D Pero thank you po
It's time to sleep :)
Goodnight then :) or is it just the haiku :)
Just the haiku. :) Haha. ^^
I've made this haiku just a lil time before i sleep and that's why it's like that :)
Yes, it's quite good. I have a friend @madsquash she likes micropoetry. ^^ She's pretty good too. You might want to check her out. ^^
sure i will check her ^^
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