hey fox. I love the photo and the poetry - not trying to be a dick but what are you using to count your syllables ? Pretty sure thats 3,3,3. ITs cool all the same - For future reference - Give ww.haikusyllablecounter.com a try I use it when i need to double check. but computers can be wrong.
No worries - I'm very much not in favour of the old 5-7-5 model for haiku in English. Most modern haiku publications steer clear of this as well, as haiku is moving far beyond the forced sound of 5-7-5. A trend towards more concise syllable counts around 11-12 is more the norm nowadays :)