Haiku Contest #6: Old Friends
Welcome to the sixth haiku contest!
The theme this time around is old friends. You can follow that theme as literally or broadly as you want.
Give me a great haiku using the theme. Also keep in mind that haiku traditionally reflect the current season in some way. In Japan right now that would be late summer or early autumn, but your current season may vary depending on where in the world you are.
Haiku Contest Rules
(please read carefully)
Upvote and Resteem this post. The upvote is to give me enough funds to pay the winners, and the resteem is to spread the word to draw more people in.
Write a haiku.
- Post it in the comments to this post
- Make your own post with the haiku and a link to this post
You may include a title or a headnote. A headnote is a short bit of text that sets the scene for the haiku. Some haiku poets use them (Basho and Shiki did) and some don't. You may also include a photo if you want.
No syllable requirement, just keep it short. Aim for one breath. You can read my thoughts on syllable counts in English haiku here.
- Nor does it have to be three lines. See my thoughts here.
In addition to the theme for this contest, it should have some kind of reference to nature and have a juxtaposition of images. I write should not must. If you think your haiku is strong enough to do without, go for it. I am not stuck in tradition and I welcome new creative ideas.
Consider this quote from Jack Kerouac:
[A] Haiku must be very simple and free of all poetic trickery and make a little picture and yet be as airy and graceful as a Vivaldi Pastorella.
Have at it!
(Psst—If you are stuck for ideas, go read some of the translated haiku in my Haiku of Japan series. Here is an index of the first 100 translations.
I encourage you to tell your friends on Discord or steemit chat. The more people we can get involved here, the more fun we can have. It makes it tougher for me to judge, but I consider that a good problem to have.
Sample
Here is a haiku I used in the article referenced above.
evening
snow beating down
my son is snoring
You can see I give a nod to the season, and there is also a shift in the action as we move from the scene (lines 1 and 2) to my son.
Another Sample
This one, a classic from Buson:
on the temple bell
sleeping
a butterfly
You can read more about that haiku here.
An American Haiku Sample
And here is one of my favorites from Jack Kerouac:
No telegram today
only more leaves
fell.
Close Date and Prizes
Contest will go for 7 days, so that means the final day you can submit is next Monday, Oct 1st (Japan time).
No sponsor this time so prizes will be a little different.
- 2 STEEM for first place
- 1 STEEM for second place
- .5 STEEM for third place
Also, if this post exceeds $6 in upvotes, I will sponsor all three winners for 1 share of @steembasicincome.
I will be the sole judge but I may consult with some others to get their opinions.
Have fun!
Calling all previous contestants.
@acmjones @alheath @andrewcarnegie @anikekirsten @anjkara @archeothot @artofchi @bennettitalia @bex-dk @breezin @carmalain7 @carolkean @chetro @crescendoofpeace @damianjayclay @danbiohackingman @dawnsheree @deaconlee @diebitch @divineinyang @eaglespirit @ecoinstant @edouard @emdesan @emergehealthier @eprolific @funbobby51 @gails-word-syrup @geekorner @girlbeforemirror @haikufictiondju @hartfloe @hohothewise @huesos @iamthegray @impatietoctopus @jacksondavies @jayo @jmvanbreda @kimberlylane @lakshmi @lanzjoseg @maddiedee @maflex @memeitbaby @mermaidvampire @millennialnow @moneyinfant @nobyeni @omedina88 @onetree @operahoser @pinkgeek @platosgroove @poetrybyjeremy @puppetmaster1111 @rlt47 @sgt-dan @themadrunnah @theodora87 @therosepatch @tinypaleokitchen @tomosan @twotripleow @tygertyger @uxmanqaxim @vdux @viking-ventures
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Here's my entry now that RC has been reset...
![natural_companions.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmQGg1Fxbzt8TyY6wJUDMJk3U8K9oDBvVPrwo6dVEogoFn/natural_companions.jpg)
I started off doing a poem more appropriate for the week, but maybe you'll set another contest with the HF20 earthquake as the theme.
@dbooster's contest,
back again with words and wit,
liberates haiku.
I just have to wonder ... is the haiku bot still alive?
Beyond that, I'll probably participate and I'm happy to promote. :-)
I hope it's dead. I dislike that bot. It is spreading the misconception that haiku are only games at counting and that literally anything that is 17 syllables long is a haiku.
Please participate when you can :) I am going to extend this another week due to the insanity of the HF20 downgrade, so there will be more time. I'll make a post about the extension within the next few days.
Downgrade! Best laugh all day.
Yes I know the haiku bot is all about the count but it brings back fond memories of my first introduction to haiku.
I may play with it over the weekend. Can I make 15?
15 syllable count or 15 haiku? Make it any count you want (just keep it short, ideally one breath) or make as many haiku as you'd like. Either is ok ;)
Glad I could add a laugh to your day :)
15 haiku. I either get none or a bunch when I sit down to puzzle it. Glad to know it's all ok.
Look who I found just now! Of all places! On the ridiculousness that is Stinc trying to explain HF20 downgrade patches.
LOL rich!
I think haikubot mostly works when we're least expecting it. The bot is also limited to the 17 syllable version.