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RE: An Original Haiku: Moon

in #haiku • 6 years ago

Check this whether it is ok...Not an expert in counting syllables and all...Please have a look and let me know...Just feel interesting to make shape to something through few words

As Kid Wondered What,
Then told as King of Stars in sky,
Now as Earth's kid in blue sky

Thanks in advance

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     6 years ago 

    @angelro - A syllable is easy to count it is where a sound change occurs in a word.

    Wondered = Won - dered, (2)
    horrible = Hor - ri - ble (3)

    so you have 5-8-7

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     6 years ago 

    Appreciate your way to teach me a new stuff....
    Power of HHG might be

    Thanks a lot

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