Great piece! The flow, the rhymes and whatnot. Though there is still space for improvements, I must still say I'm impressed as a person who loves poetry and loves writing poems myself. Keep writing more to hone what you already have. The potential. Upvoted and Followed! Cheers!
😍 . thank you for this @jamesanity06 , just wrote this last night before going to sleep. hehe. and yes! thanks also for being honest, i still need more improvements. 👍❤️❤️❤️
Also I feel the sentiments you're trying to show in this poem. I too have experienced homesteading, and I must say it's not as easy as it looks like. But the reward is so much greater than anything, the love of your family and the satisfaction you achieve once you realize you have done well with what you are doing. Keep em poems coming! Full Steem ahead!
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