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RE: Sunday Funnies #1 – Kenny the Koala gets ripped!

in #funny6 years ago

Great post! I love the title, and the request at the top for suggestions in the comments, excellent audience engagement. You've gotten equal views and votes, a sign of an audience that is really following and enjoying your work. Well done! Critique. Jokes are hard to write. Your punchline might have been clearer, if you'd used the friend's name, in reference to the crocodile, kenny says, "Whoa, Lenny? How much did you drink." Also, I'd continue to call him, "Lenny the lizard" so we understand the confusion without any hesitation. But, that's pretty picky. Nicely done, it's a great post with some really solid engagement.

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I'll update the punch line thanks for the feedback.

Awesome, I feel bad for some of the nitpicky critiques, but, I love seeing you guys gain confidence and grow your audience!

Your there to do just that. Its our choice if we listen or not. Into look at day 5 now. Won't be back online until later tonight so hope to get it complete on time. Back to work. Boo.

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