Oh my freakin..... You need to write the rest! Where is the rest of it???
I honestly thought that this was going to be a Romeo and Juliet style. It started off like it, but once again another twist with action. I just love it!
Makes the reader be on the edge of their seat. Well me anyways and makes me want to read more on orc fighting.
Do they lose sight of each other over the years and find each other once more? Does one end up marrying to keep the elf culture going??? I got questions! I want to read more :D
Wow, I am so glad you like this story! I don't know I just stopped at 500 words. LOL
I couldn't seem to get past this point, but that does not mean I will not go back at some point and continue ... you bring up awesome questions and those that I may answer in the future ... so glad you liked it! :)