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RE: Legacy of Shadows: The Rise of Oliver Twist
Thank you brother… I do appreciate the feed back. I got some idea from your post and @marito74 post and I’m thinking of re-writing this again.
Even kitty had given me some clue on what to do to make it more shorter..
Oh you want to rewrite again? Is that allowed. I guess you should write the fable story instead.
If you still want to talk about Oliver and Robinhood it is ok but changing the story won't be nice. Remember the comments on that post.
This time.. is off the contest!! Just want to give it a second trial with the few tips I’ve gotten now..
Ok
you can post your second version in freewriters. I like to see what you make out of it. @saintkelvin17 is right it's time for the fable and the film review