Hearts Toward The Moon

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We slept, hearts towards the moon as stars painted our faces.

The warm night breeze through leaf laden trees played melodies and soothed us into sleep.

Our spirits hushed, nearby waters rushed in hurry to the sea.

We slept as dead while in our heads the world swept by easy.

I would have slept on lazily
my heart at peace with you,
but in the morn our faces bore a glistening layer of dew.

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Gorgeous imagery with a soothing cadence. Truly a work of truth and beauty.

Thank you so much for reading and that lovely comment.

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Wow! I loved this piece. So dreamlike. "As stars painted our faces..." "We slept as dead/While in our heads/The world swept by easy" This is beautiful Janelle.

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Thank you my friend! 😄

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@wandrnrose7,

I was really at loss of words....!!!

This fantastic freewrite poem is flowing like a cool breeze, which refreshes our minds.

After a moment, my mind was reverberating with the words, and they were given below...

"These paintings are magnificent to see.

These melodies are mellifluous to hear.

The gushing of water to the sea filled our spirits with ebullience.

My sleep is filled with tranquility.

My heart is beating with upbeat happiness.

And finally,
these dewdrops are a fantabulous gift to us by our Mother Nature!"

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How beautiful your poem is in answer. Perhaps we should unite them in a poem together! Let me know if you're interested. Much love have a great day. I'm so glad that you liked my poem.

Hi @wandrnrose7,

Sure. My joy knew no bounds.

Thanks for the compliment!

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