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RE: Five minute free write: the smell from within
Very nice. I like your style of writing, it keeps me on my toes as the story gradually unfolds. It's thrilling and sharp, lovely, and the ending with a rose... So simple and yet it ended on a cliffhanger, I want to know what comes next :)
Lol, a couple people have said that. And I was wondering where it was going as well. I think when the buzzer dinged it was a good thing. To let people take the story from here wherever they might want to :) Thanks for reading!