Freewrite Prompt- If you have any thoughts, please let me know

in #freewrite8 years ago

Olivia was about to get married to William. She was excited and thrilled of the idea of being married. She wasn't in love with William but she felt safe and secure. She trusted him with her life. She had been in love before. Bode captured her heart, but they were like apples and oranges. She an extrovert, he an introvert. He was Nigerian and she was English. They thought their love was enough to keep them together but ultimately their differences pushed them apart. On the eve of her wedding she ran into Bode. She hadn't seen him in 5 years. They hugged and talked and they both looked morose. Before he left she looked in his eyes. Hoping for a sign, hoping he would tell her he was back, he would be the one. But he said nothing.

"If you have any thoughts, please let me know"

He wanted to tell her she was making a mistake but he loved her too much to put her life in such disarray.

"I'm happy for you. You have my blessings"

And with a hug it ended. She never saw him again but wondered why she saw him that day on the eve of her wedding. She thought of him but eventually placed him in a box in her heart and opened her heart to her shining armor in the person of William, her ever steady rock.

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Well thanks a lot, now I'm left wondering if I was just my wife's safety net lol! 🤔 🙄 😃

Just kidding, nice freewrite! 🙂

Haha! Storytelling is crazy sometimes. Thanks for commenting!

Too bad he didn't share all of his thoughts... My heart is sad for William.

Today I'm stepping in for Marianne.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-78-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-pen

Ouch, too many people get married for the wrong reason. Great story!

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