I love the way you described the scene and what the character was doing. I was able to picture everything perfectly. : )
I have also been amazed from what I write when doing a freewrite. I say, "Where did that just come from?" LOL!
Resident cat here, anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Here is the new prompt. https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-586-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-chapter
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