Day 64: 5 Minute Freewrite- Prompt: pill- Part 3

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FREEWRITE COLLABORATION

This is Part 3 of a freewrite challenge initiated by @mariannewest for Day 64: Prompt: pill

I posted my freewrite here: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@whatisnew/day-64-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-pill

@deaconlee replied and kept the story going. You can read @deaconlee's Part 2 here: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@deaconlee/day-64-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-pill

I was told to end it...no pressure right? What a hard act to follow! Here is my ending to my original story:

PART 3

The knife was put in a safe place by the Sherrif elf and the head mechanic elf went back to the shop to repair the damage caused by the knife that was found in the sleigh. He heard moans and groans coming from the frozen figure that was hanging off of the back of the sleigh. It was Bubba, thawing out. The sherrif elf took Bubba to Magictowne Hospital where the doctor elf patched the holes in Bubba's cheeks. No more tail lights for the sleigh. The nurse elf entered the room with pain medication and as soon as Bubba looked at the pill he had another panic attack. Bubba explained how it was a pill that started this whole mess. The nurse elf showed Bubba how to swallow the pill; the elf magic way, and his normal life was given back to him.

The spirit of Christmas filled his heart and Bubba repaired the sleigh with glee. He even helped Santa deliver the presents; just in the nick of time. Last stop was Grandma's house. Santa was so impressed with her "shotgun skills" that he made grandma Honorary Christmas Eve Deputy of Magictowne for all of the Christmas's to come. Her most precious gift was watching Bubba beam with joy as he ate her figgy pudding and home-made candy, swallowing with ease. And that boys and girls, is how Christmas was saved that year; which all began when...singing "GRANDMA GOT RUN OVER BY A REINDEER!"

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Thank YOU!!! I so so SO needed to read this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU did GREAT! and a more perfect ending there never was :D

Aw, I am glad it made you happy.

Thanks so much for your encouragement. @deaconlee is a hard act to follow! : )

he is but so are you :D

you two made my day last night!! Thank you, both for that!

Awesome ending, thank's for playing along and letting me have a part in your story! That was a lot of fun and it is one of the reasons that I like these freewrites so much. We can laugh, we can play games, and we can also zone into some seriously good stories, poems and words of wisdom at times.

I so agree @deaconlee!!

Thanks for your encouraging words. I loved you playing along; it was so much fun! Your part of the story was so funny and it was a wonderful and extremely funny addition. : )
I couldn't agree with you more about the freewrites. : )

You guys created such an amusing and amazing synergy.. it's seeable that you had fun writing and you transmitted to the reader. Kudos to both of you! And now let me look for grandma got run over by reindeer!

Thanks so much @f3nix! We did have so much fun with this. Hope you like the song! : )

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