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RE: SOFT AS SILK SHARP AS SWORD - day-293-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-smooth-as-silk

in #freewrite6 years ago

Beautiful, melodic, touching and deep.
I love the comparison with the sword. Well written.

like rain poured from the end of the evening sky
watering the barren land, arid and dry
until it can grow buds from dry stumps
in the middle of the night it became a lamp.

I love this stanza

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Please keep writing. I love this!

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