SOFT AS SILK SHARP AS SWORD - day-293-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-smooth-as-silk
SOFT AS SILK SHARP AS SWORD - day-293-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-smooth-as-silk
the words slid down on the tip of the pen
come and go and can not be stopped again
form a string of sentences in a verse of poetry
in the prose lyrics I set it free
like rain poured from the end of the evening sky
watering the barren land, arid and dry
until it can grow buds from dry stumps
in the middle of the night it became a lamp
poetry with the word as soft as silk
feels sweet like milk
don't think he can't slash even if only a word
because he was sharp like a sword
the softness that makes it look beautiful
writing and reading it must be careful
read in melodious tones
the contents can burn bones
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Beautiful, melodic, touching and deep.
I love the comparison with the sword. Well written.
I love this stanza
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Please keep writing. I love this!
i will do it. Thank you your kind word. i am glad you like it
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STOPTo support your work, I also upvoted your post!
Very nice use of rhyme to evoke a feeling of compassion and vengeance. I like the contrasts used throughout your poem. Thanks.
Here is today's prompt: Day 294: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: puzzle
Great job on this poem. I nominated your work on the Recommend a Favorite Freewite Poem ~ Week 6
Thank you so much. It encourage me to keep writing..