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RE: Five minute free write: the smell from within
I really love where you went with this. And how wonderful that there is a rose in the Box. I felt the atmosphere of the man in the room all alone with a metal chair and a table. The contents of box was a total surprise! Great work!
Woohoo! I love it when people enjoy my words and are able to create meaning with them :) Thanks for stopping by and reading :)
I fully enjoyed the imagery of the story. Sorry about the typos. I use Google Voice so that my eyes can get a break from typing LOL I see my error as I come back to reply. :)
That's a super smart idea. Wish Google had an app to do all my photo editing so I could rest my eyes too. Grammar, spelling....errors happen. You still get a gold star for your comment :)
Thank you for understanding! And yes I wish there was a little more for the eyes of the old LOL!
:) I used to teach English in Japan. It's all about the message you're trying to get across, everything else is just details.