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RE: Day 122: 5 Minute Freewrite: Sunday - Prompt: Spa - Broken Part 3 - A continuation of Lola's story

in #freewrite • 7 years ago

What a beautiful piece of fiction! I really enjoyed the story and I just felt the tenderness of the mom and the sadness that her daughter would Suffer Without her. Where did Kyle go? What is not her fault... I want to know more.

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     7 years ago 

    This was a wonderful comment, thank you! I hope that the story continues to develop as organically as it started. You wanting to know more, makes me so excited to see what comes out next!

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