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RE: Day 1 of 5: Halcyon Days: 5 Minute Freewrite: Sunday - Prompt: halcyon days
What does: "she was wrapped in the old ways her uncle..." means
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What does: "she was wrapped in the old ways her uncle..." means
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My thought behind that is he used to be a good person and then something happened. For some reason he now takes his pain out on her a little at a time, getting worse as time goes on. At times, we don't want to see people as they truly are but how we remember them. It can be a very painful experience.
Of course, this is a freewrite and not much editing was done. It may work later on or it may not as this story continues to develop day by day.
Thanks for explaining, it makes sense.
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Reading that again, it was a mistake. I meant her father. Possibly uncle will work better. hmm...
Well you can change it. Quess the uncle works better.
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