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RE: She Came in through the Kitchen Window - Day 577: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: window
Amazing write, the part that caught me more was the kid was wearing a Notre Dame teeshirt, maybe because the Cathedral so much in news that it stuck with me till the end :D
Thank you for reading and commenting! The cathedral is on my mind too. Coincidentally, we saw the theater version of Disney's Hunchback a week ago (in which Quasimodo and Esmeralda's die). Days later I visited my sister and saw Notre Dame University catalogues in her house (her husband is an alum). I'm glad you let me know this leaped out at you. Now I'm inspired to do more with the metaphor. Laura is burning bridges behind her, and her marriage (unlike the cathedral) will not be rebuilt. Thanks again!
Yeah seems like Notre Dame was in your subconscious and conscious mind at many instances and came out in your writing. :)