Tongue: Day 387: 5 Minute Freewrite: SundaysteemCreated with Sketch.

in freewrite •  last year 

I'll lick you with my tongue wherever I want. You are going to enjoy it. If you don't, I'll gut you like a fish.

No, you can't go home. This is your home. I'm going to lick you with my tongue and you're going to enjoy it. Fuck, ya ... that's right. Don't fake it. Mean it. I mean it.

crr..a.z..z.y psycho-bitch.

My tongue. Lick my tongue. Suck on my tongue. Don't bite my touch. I'll gut you like a fish bitch. Lick my tongue. Suck on my tongue. You're going to like what I do to you.

I'm going to stick myself inside of you. It doesn't hurt. Shut your trap before I let myself see what your blood looks like.

Sick? No. I was born this way. Awe, you're a little wet. Want to feel me and my tongue? Sure you do. Don't fucking cry bitch! Suck my tongue. Enjoy the fun.

You're not good enough for anyone else. I haven't done a damn thing to reinforce that belief, nor have I cum. You did this to yourself. Do you feel my tongue riding up your crotch? Suck my cock bitch. Rub your tongue against the tip of my rock hard penis.

Rape? Say another word like that and I'll have you plastered all over the tabloids. What will that do to your reputation? Shut up. Enjoy my tongue. Polly want a cracker - Maybe I should get off her first." Enjoy my tongue. Stay with me.

Stop crying. I'm almost up to here. You don't enjoy my tongue. Fuc....kkk. I'm not going to be able to cum. This is the last time I'll invite a bitch like you to enjoy my tongue. Remember, you did this to yourself. You should have enjoyed my tongue.


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Oh my God, I should have read this on Sunday and go for church confession straight.

Rape and blow job. Oh my God.

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I thought about putting a negative trigger warning at the top of this one. 🤗

Brilliantly brutal!

Like how it could fall either way, total kidnap and assault, ending in murder for the girl who couldn't pretend to like it. Or, someone who had got themselves in too deep, leading someone a pretty chase only to find themselves caught, and not really wanting to follow through. The ending really lends to the latter, in that that would really be her fault, if she'd made sexual promises including more risque role-play, accepted an invitation to follow through, and then balked at the end, and now she doesn't get the promotion or whatever she was trading for. Although the start goes more towards kidnap to be kept in the house, and the protagonists growing rage and consuming desire, go more towards kidnap as well.

The room for interpretation really adds to it, fun take on the prompt, I do enjoy catching your freewrites where i can.

I have #tellastorytome round open at the moment if you wana get it on it (you may have already seen it, not checked, just thought i'd mention it while I was here <3)

I almost didn’t want to post it. This sort of writing scares me.

Thanks for reading and your comment.

  ·  last year (edited)

I can understand that, it is a twisted tale to say the least but that's horror, the fun is in looking the things that repel and scare you right in the face, or for me anyway. Shame you didn't have idea in time for the last round, arguably incredibly scary :)

that was scary!! Feels like you channeled Harvey Weinstein for this piece.

Ha! It is one of the moods I'm in. Instead of flipping out on line and venting to a place that will not work, I wrote this piece.

Ok, I read a couple of the sentences and thought I will just hand over the next prompt...


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haha! Sometimes it is like that. I don't blame you. This was a little sick and twisted.