5-Minute Freewrite Challenge: Round is a Shape
I hope I'm not too late for making my freewrite. Initiated by @mariannewest, the promt is 'Round is a shape'.
My freewrite is base of what I feel.
I'm sorry for being dramatic. But this is my way now to comfort myself. And this freewrite helps me to say the words I couldn't speak. Thank you for understanding.
Round is a shape,
Round water from my eyes coming out
Tears falling down,
It hurts, I don't know what should I do
I can't help it,
I feel self pity
This round world
So unfair to think
Burning inside like
there's a bomb in my heart
I want to shout
But I can't , all I can do is to pray, keep calm and cry
Nobody cares, they don't mind
My situation is like a round thumbtacks hit you
It's pain inside but you can't noticed outside.
*Note: photo is mine, and I took screenshot while using this application (http://www.themostdangerouswritingapp.com/write.html)
You wrote such an honest piece and were brave enough to share it. I don't see feeling hurt by something as self pity. Being human means that we will feel the full gamut of emotions and have to bear through them as we sort things out and grow. Feeling the way that you do and then stopping to think of others, and of how they may be hurting, just shows what a kind heart you have. And I've found that there are people who care. Just maybe not the ones that you want to. Or, they care, but don't know how to express it or how to help. I'm a complete stranger to you, and this may seem weird, but if you'd like, I'll listen. Either way, I wish you well.
I'm stepping in as the prompt deliverer for Marianne today.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-99-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-sunset
You wrote such an honest piece and were brave enough to share it. I don't see feeling hurt by something as self pity. Being human means that we will feel the full gamut of emotions and have to bear through them as we sort things out and grow. Feeling the way that you do and then stopping to think of others, and of how they may be hurting, just shows what a kind heart you have. And I've found that there are people who care. Just maybe not the ones that you want to. Or, they care, but don't know how to express it or how to help. I'm a complete stranger to you, and this may seem weird, but if you'd like, I'll listen. Either way, I wish you well.
I'm stepping in as the prompt deliverer for Marianne today.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-99-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-sunset
Always feel free to post what you can't say!! This is what writing does - takes you straight to your feelings!!