The essential part of a poem is to convey a feeling, to make the reader feel a series of sensations, it should go further than the rhyme and the words chosen with great care, it most show its vocation. When I read the freewrite of @lilimacías my heart stirred and experienced the bitterness she tries to transmit, so much that it became a lump in the throat.

As I commented to her in her post, just few times a writing manages to provoke a reflection that touches the heart of the reader, what she wrote has the efficiency of a poem, even though it was not the intention according to the tags she used.

That is why I humbly ask that her post be considered in the value it has.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@lilianmacias/spanish-freewrite-no-121-mensaje-diario-de-5-minutos-agrio
Thank you.