In this post I want to talk about a poem by @jakim7
When I read this poem I found it intriguing, the first quartet seems to be describing a scene of boredom, almost bitterness, in the next paragraph he starts to establish your mood more convincingly based on a loss, while in the last two paragraphs he defines a heartbreaking despair, he seems quite elegant to describe a situation of longing as a wound that is always open.

https://steemit.com/freewritepoetry/@jakim7/tiempo-de-agonia-cuaderno-de-poesia-poemarium