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RE: The Sky is Clear [5MinuteFreeWrite]
Ahh that poor bunny D: (I suppose it could have also been a kangaroo or a jerboa or a sentient pogo stick with ears but bunny is what I'm going with for now XP) Maybe his name should have been Rip :S It was a glorious buildup to that fateful leap and I suppose that could really only have ended a few ways XD
Hahahaha!! I snuck in a very subtle clue about what Rib is. You have to look at two words. But, a bunny is close enough! Though, for the life of me, I don't know how I could ever subject a bunny to such fate. Woe is Rib!
Well frog was my other guess but for whatever reason I thought there were ears mentioned XD
HAHA! I was careful about anatomy, to preserve the ambiguity and all that.
Oh, and you got it! What gave it away, checkMATE? Did you spot my easter egg?
I don't know XD What I consciously latched on to was a lot of hopping. And rereadng it there's no mention of ears so I don't know why I thought there were ears (which is what led me onto bunny). Maybe I Just needed more coffee at the time XD
Haha! Makes me giddy reading this, MATE-roska! I've been trying to experiment with ambiguous writing, so I guess I'm inching forward on the right track haha!