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RE: Chapter 1: Swallowed By the Floor -- Fabulous Freewrite In the Art of Stephen King
Yep, flashback is needed. Maybe some thought to how the flashback could set up a chapter after being absorbed.
"she didn't understand why, but she felt a connection, a familiarity , a call, something chilling"
Grats again on an absolutely amazing start!
Thanks.