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RE: Chapter 1: Swallowed By the Floor -- Fabulous Freewrite In the Art of Stephen King
I am dying to know what she heard over the phone for one. A flashback would be nice. Let us know what her life was like before the phone call. What news led to her present predicament... Just an idea.
OK. Second installment is ready, here
Yep, flashback is needed. Maybe some thought to how the flashback could set up a chapter after being absorbed.
"she didn't understand why, but she felt a connection, a familiarity , a call, something chilling"
Grats again on an absolutely amazing start!
Thanks.