warm amber eyes
warm amber eyes
your eyes are cool when it's hot
will warm when it's cold
your eyes give a sad color
which gives peace like stern wind to the sailor
Your warm amber eyes pierce the chest
without feeling past my face
hit sharply with a blink
make this self sink
the heart becomes restless
like getting foreign guests
feel someone is always squeezing
enslaving an uncertain feeling
don't know why this feeling is so deep
like freezing my lips
no spoken words
but seemed to be the owner of the world
This post to participate in Day 629: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: warm amber eyes
What a charming, sweet poem!
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Eyes do have so much power!!!
Yes. you are right. When I was child, if my father look at me i must interpreted well. Then i know his intention with his staring
Beautiful poem. The eyes are the window of the soul.
Thank you. We can journey the soul from the eyes