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That is definitely some stronger imagery! Yeah, in poetry, many times I think of the abstract and I have to pause to match that with a descriptive imagery. Maybe that's the natural process or simply that I am not as used to doing it. I like obscurity, yet a balance with descriptions is always nice so that the reader is not lost.

I see how poems can be developed from these freewrites. Sometimes, even just one line or one phrase can develop to be something much more meaningful. Thank you for the comment - I love how much effort you put into it :)