This was a great write. The second part was introduced and written very well. The best lines were
Oh, I will still continue writing what they say to me, but not because it's my only defense, but because I want to remember every moment, every word, every movement of this day
This just deserved so many claps.
Also, strange coincidence. My male character in my freewrite is also named Jacob, and the other freewrite I read had a Jacques. LOL. This is freaky coincidental!
Thank you so much! I enjoyed that line too! Kinda just came out, wrapped it up nicely!
That is councidental!! I am going to check it out lol! Thats so funny how things like that work out!
Yeah, at times it's hard to wrap up in freewrites, but you did it so well and just at the right time.
Awe, thanks so much! And thank you for taking the time to read it!