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RE: Day 109: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: yard sale
There is a depth to this story. There is a lot of pain. I get that in the end, the mother pleased her daughter, but the way she talked to her felt so cold. Comparing her to her little brother also does not help. But it is not because the mother is cruel - their situation where they do need money. Great write.
Thank you!! I am so glad you got so much out of it! Thank you for reading!