Beach Trip (Freewrite #13: Spa)

in #freewrite7 years ago

Freewriting

Today's prompt is Spa. I enjoy doing these freewrites; especially after yesterday's emotional roller-coaster! As usual, five-minutes of non-stop writing and no editing afterwards.

Beach Trip

Lay on your stomach and relax. Without the restriction of clothes; relax. Don't let these hands bother you. Your shoulders were once concrete; now soft as sand. My voice is like the soft waves on the beach - gentle. Keep looking downwards. This beach is a safe place where you become sand; not trapped within an hourglass. Time is not a luxury when you smell the salty ocean.

Can you hear the seagulls? They fly above us without posing harm. They are peaceful creatures, enjoying the flight in fresh air. You are breathing that same air; that clean air that purifies your lungs. Relax once more. Your muscles are now at ease. Keep imagining yourself, sunbathing on the beach. The sun is warm, but not scorching. Its rays hug your thighs, tanning them ever so slightly. Your bronzen glory awaits you.

I hope you enjoyed that. Please, pay $40 to the spa receptionist.


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Maybe I'll go to the beach today! Nice one, calmed me right down.

Hopefully the beach isn't as expensive as the spa! Mindfulness is a beautiful trick

Ah, yes...definitely the heart of the poet. Enjoyed the read. Such good energy. I invite you to take a look at a post I put up yesterday, "The Soul of a Poet". I think you might enjoy. I don't know the guidelines here otherwise I would have entered a link. But is that kosher? Anyway, come on over and take a look. And again, my gratitude for your contests and presence.

You are right; posting links in generally considered as spam and frowned upon. But you asked me nicely, so I will check that out. I'm not the one who organises the freewrite, but I did just organise a contest. Check out my profile if you're interested. Would love to see you try.

Thanks for the heads up. I do believe I'm entered in your contest.

Very very relaxing read, and a great bit of humour thrown in at the end!! Good stuff

Glad it was relaxing. It was hard to keep writing and not drift with the mindfulness thoughts.

I enjoyed your beach trip. To me, nothing beats a day listening to the water the gulls cry. Thanks for the enjoyable mind trip!

Glad I made up for last story's uncomfortable feelings. Us freewriters need to all meet on a beach and sip cocktails together. One day...

I so want to do this! <3 hugs!

A lovely read with an interesting end! Well done!

thank you :) glad you enjoyed it

Lol glad I'm not the only one who resorted to a beach for the spa prompt. I like the ending too, lol.

The beach and the waves are just so relaxing! I have to take a look

made me want to go to the beach.....

let's go to beach-each, let's go get away!

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