5 Minute Freewrite (prompts-record, yogurt and coconut)
I have been on a much needed vacation. Still have a few days to relax,
but am getting back into the freewrites. So, here we go with my
continuing story. Here are the prompts I missed.
..
"Ok, we will just have to be careful with getting the rest out. Go back
inside before you get caught. Take a head count so we know how
many are left."
"Ok, will see you soon as I can."
Charlotte was heading to her room when Nate had stopped her.
"I know what you are doing. For the record I saw you run out back
with that kid. But I won't say anything under one condition!"
"What do you want?"
"I want all your coconut yogurt."
"But I love that stuff."
"That is the deal or I squeal."
"pick something else."
"MR BAN....
"ok ok, fine you can have them! Ugh I don't know how your sister put
up with you."
"well I would be more worried about you putting up with me now.
One wrong look or word and I will tell Mr Banson what is going on."
"Fine! Just keep your mouth shut. That is the deal."
They shake hands closing the deal.
..
Sounds like Charlotte has her work cut out for her now. Nate is going
to be a handful.
Here is the previous link to the story.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@pixiehunter/5-minute-freewrite-sunday-fool
Very clever how you worked in all the prompts. Good job! :)
Hehehe, thx. Am learning that from catching what others have done. :-)
Hahaha, now that is MY kind of deal! (Assuming that I'm the one that ends up with the yogurt!) Cool story you have going here, I love the characterization!
Also, today I am running a bit late, but I’m here in a rush of spastic, distracted thoughts to deliver Today’s Daily Prompt for the freewrite. Feel free to join us if you have the time and thank you for joining us today! It is such an awesome community to be a part of and now we have a new page with contests, new challenges and even more community:
Lol, I have tried it and didn't turn into a fan. One of those flavors you eat once every few years, lol. Glad you like my story. No worries about late delivery for prompt. My online times tend to bounce all over. :-)