I know right? It shocked the hell out of me. Good grammar, interesting details to round out the character, a well set scene (although I wish I had said the truck was on the OTHER side of the bridge she had to cross), a story arc, tension, the whole nine yards and all just popped out without trying. I mean, I was astonished! Thanks for coming back to read it! I refer to it now and then in my posts because it was such a critical moment for me.