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RE: Naked (Freewrite #28: Artichoke)
Almost has a vampire, or Silence of the Lambs feel to it. A little spooky but the logic is there - why consume the outer layers when you can peel them back and tuck into a delicious heart? Lol...
Also, if you do not want your heart to be eaten, don't portray yourself as something delicious. In the heat of the moment, the person won't look back and analyse, but it was not the heart that looked the prettiest. They will eat it up before thinking twice! hahaha