Her Home Maid Jams (Freewrite Story)

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Prompt: Her homemade jams

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Her Home Maid Jams

Mrs Jonez decided that she would take a stroll and leave her maid, Sonya, to finish cleaning.

Sonya cannot resist. She sees the electric guitar and needs to fire it up. It is time for a play. Everyone is out, no one will notice.

There is a knock at the door. It is Brian May and Roger Taylor from Queen.

“Do you fancy a jam?”

The maid needs to compose herself. A jam with some rock gods.

Of course, she wants to say yes, but is struggling for the words

Roger begins, supplying the drums. Brian and Sonya play in rhythm. It is a glorious sound.

Then all of a sudden the door opens. It is Mrs Jonez. Sonya thinks she's in trouble.

“Wow, Sonya,” said Mrs Jonez. “That was amazing.”

“Thank you,” replied Sonya.

“My home maid jams with Queen. Do you fancy some home made jam?”

“We have scones and clotted cream too,” said Sonya.

“Perfect,” said Mr Jonez.

The end


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That is just a cool story - rocking with rock gods! I will sing my heart out haha! I like how these kinds of contests give different ideas.

Yes, a nice bit of fun. Next time it will be a jam with The Jam. :-)

My home maid jams with Queen.

You got a proper laugh out of me there - I fall for wordplay too easily I guess :) I think if Brian May turned up at my house I'd be too starstruck to play anything...

Me too. I'm glad you had a laugh. This was a fun story to write. Thank you for reading.

Haha, I love this! I hadn't even thought of the other meanings of "jam" when I saw the prompt. :-) Though now I also want clotted cream and jam on a scone. I haven't had those in at least 20 years~

Do it the Devon way. Put the cream on first and the jam on top. yummy :-)

You always come up with great ideas, but this was just incredible.... you'll excuse me for picturing Brian May as he looked back in the day....
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I did miss it. I was out. Luckily I just managed to get it done before I go sleep. Thank you for your kind comment. :-)

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Oh my what is happening...my comments was posted three times.

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