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RE: Day 77 5 Minute Freewrite - Shattered
This was an amazing #freewrite! I love how you incorporated the prompt into the first line of the story. This is an impressive story for a 5min #freewrite. I felt very attached to the narrator. You have a great voice. My favorite line was,
My mother was. Pretty.
The kind of pretty that made her wish she wasn't.
It put me into the shoes of a woman who may resent her appearance despite her beauty. Possibly because of the unwanted attention from men, or the constant envy from other women.
I also posted a #freewrite for today (Day 77 - "Thoughts"). I'd love if you read it and let me know what you think! I'll definitely be on the lookout for more of your posts =)
Thank you kindly @mkkenny13 and nice to meet you. Read yours and left a tiny comment. Following you for future posts. One wondering soul to another.