Five minute free write - Cinnamon

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Todays free write was a bit of a challenge.

I had to sit and think about the prompt, CINNAMON, for some good long minutes. What did I associate with cinnamon...did I want to tell a personal story, a fiction story, could I figure a crazy twist that would get people thinking, perhaps some greater social message, sci-fi of some kind...yeah, my mind went to all of those places.

I finally ended up on what you're about to read. It kind of evolved as I wrote. Don't be prepared for zombies, aliens, end-of-the-world plagues. Today we're taking a walk on the wild side of a Tuesday, or is today Wednesday, morning.

Without further ado...


The chill morning caused me to shiver, even through the layers I wore.

One long sleeved shirt, a sweater, and a coat, it was barely enough. My body was stiff. Awoken by a noxious sound at too early of a time. The memory of a 4.am. bang-bang-bang-slide-bang-knock-knock of an upstairs neighbors unknown activities fresh in my mind.

I could almost see my breath in the early light. The gate made it's everyday creak and groan as I swung it open. My haven was close, only a couple of minutes away. On a walk I've done hundreds of time I took a minute to think. What would my day be like? What would I get done? Would I find what I was looking for? Finally?

The bell dinged as I entered.

A warm flush spread onto my face as I went from outside to in. A smile, a greeting, a fist bump. This was my place. My people. My zone. Everyday for months, the same routine. The same place. The same people.

It's my Cheers. Where everybody knows my name. A sanctuary in a city of stadiums. No one watching me here. A calm place.

I didn't even have to ask.

He just smiled and poured me a cup. Hot, black, that sound so familiar of it splashing into my mug. My first action, as it always is, that slow approach to my nose with smile growing on my face.

A deep breath in. Chocolate, nuts, hints of cinamon and a bit of berry.
I'm ready for my day.


My daily routine is pretty much the same. In my perpetual hunt for work as a freelancer I spend a lot of time doing the same things. Most of those things are in front of a computer so I try and find a place where I can be out, still get work done, and meet people at the same time. That happens to be my coffee shop.

I call it mine because I'm there every day. People are surprised when I don't show up, and let me know they missed me. It's a really cool feeling for someone who's going through what I'm going through. Even my last place didn't have anywhere near this kind of neighborhood vibe. I know everyone's name, and everyone has some kind of story that's interesting to listen to. I swear, there are no boring people who chill at this place. Even though you might think so from first impressions, like a good book getting to know them takes a minute. One of my friends there, a college student, remarked casually to me the other day, 'seriously, everyone who I talk to has some sort of lesson to teach me.' And it's true.

Weird Wave coffee in Boyle Heights, LA...if you're wondering. That's where I spend most of my life now...or at least for now. I'd better get on with the rest of my day. I just realized my ending to the free write is outpacing the word count of the actual free write...so. adieu!

Almost forgot the challenge links :) Check out @mariannewest's Five minute free write challenge here

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Thanks for sharing this #freewrite and giving us a glimpse into your daily life. I'm curious...what is it that you're looking for when you say,

What would I get done? Would I find what I'm looking for? Finally?

Also, you briefly mention what you're going through... I'm curious about that as well.

That is a long and complex answer, lol. I'm looking for a new day, the sun to rise, opportunity that leads to contentment.

As for specifically what, check out my feed. It's pretty much splashed out across the last 90 or so posts :) Wrote something specific last night about it.

Thanks for dropping by and reading!

You paint such a very clear picture. I can almost feel the warmth of the place, smell the coffee and hear the buzz of chatter.

NOTES: “noxious” denotes smells – I think you meant “obnoxious”

You wrote: “I spend most of my life now...or at least for now.” There’s nothing wrong with your word choice. It’s just my opinion (and opinions are just feelings, not facts), but I recommend changing one of the “now” words to avoid repetition within the same sentence.

Hehe, thanks for catching that noxious bit. Usually I go through and check for word choice and spelling. As for the 'now' bit, that was just me making an emphasis. Could have been done a different way, but during a 5 minute free write on the Most Dangerous App, you always gotta be moving forward otherwise it deleters your writing. Only a small window to stop and think. :)

Thanks for coming by!

You’re welcome. I hope it was helpful. As for the “now” comment, like I wrote, “it’s just my opinion” – and y’know what they say about those! 😜

For the life of me I cant pronounce the word cinnamon. Lol
Thank you for sharing your writing :) As I've said before, your writing inspires me.

Keep posting my friend!

I just tried to say the word out loud like 3 times...I fail too, lol. Cinnanniniman, cinnamononim...ugh

And, thanks again for those beautiful words. I'm ignoring what my brain is telling me and trusting in the people around me in their opinions :) 'Believe in the me that believes in you!' One of my favorite quotes from an amazing anime, Gurren Lagen. But, still, always an eye on quality, lol.

Hope you have a great day!

You make the life of a freelancer sound pretty good. Im sure it comes with its challenges though such as having to constantly find new work.

Nice freewrite

Hehe, it can be at times. Lots of moments where I'm like, I'm doing this for money? Or, this is a business meeting? Lots of restrictions too...and always having to hunt for more work.

Thanks for dropping by and reading. :)

You coffee house reminds of one tucked away in Lubbock, Texas away from the main drag. It was a place of refuge. Thanks! Here is today's prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-126-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-switch

A place to chill, a place to gather, a place to make friends, coffee shops can be the best places :) Heading over to today's prompt now :)

Sounds like a great coffee house. Hoping lots of work coming your way...

It's an amazing place. Sitting there right now, hehe. Got some things slowly coming in...not as quick as I'd like, but it's something :)

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