Very good reading! it's kind of sad though if even vampires have to play by the rules :)).... as for bending the rules, if the story demands it you can bend the rules (only don't tell @mariannewest I said that!)
In the meantime, here's the next prompt:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-305-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-tears

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