Blue silence (Five minutes freewrite)

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

The first light of day paints the sky a bright shade of orange, prompting the tiny crabs on the beach to scuttle back to the safety of the sea, where they will spend the day buried in the sand. It’s going to be a splendid day - with just a couple of innocuous white clouds decorating the blue expanse of the summer sky. The sea is almost perfectly still with almost imperceptible waves barely making a ripple on the blue waters.
Perfect silence. The beach is so quiet you could hear the beetles rustling through the fallen leaves in forest on the hill overlooking the sea. The light of day makes little difference in the dense forest, so they go about their business unperturbed, doing whatever it is that beetles do. They’re small brown creatures that nest among the tree roots. I wish I could tell you their name, but they have none as they didn’t exist before.

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By midday the sun bathes the shore in brightness, leaving the sand burning hot. Were there any sunbathers out on the beach they’d be sauntering around, crying out loud and cursing all the way to the sea, vowing not to come out until the sun sets. As it is, the beach is deserted - no soles will get burned and no gleaming young bodies will be soothed by the cool transparent water. Maybe it is for the better - as no perfect beach outings will be ruined by the evening storm, which no weatherman or seasoned fisherman could predict with such a clear sky. No mothers running around to gather their little ones, no towels and bags picked up in a hurry, no flip-flops getting lost in the sand, no plastic toys forgotten in the castles flattened in an instant by the sudden downpour.
As for the tiny crabs, who also have not been named, they don’t mind the storms. If anything, they enjoy the little puddles the rain leaves behind.
Tomorrow, the sunrise will dry the sand again, making it burning hot once more. It’s been like this for eons, although neither crabs nor beetles know of eons or passing time, for that matter. There is nothing like history in this little critters’ world, no legends of the giants that once ruled the world, giants that could have squashed whole tribes of bugs under their feet without noticing. Even that instinct that bugs of old used to have to scurry away in the face of imminent danger has long been forgotten, written out of their survival strategies, for are no more feet roaming the earth. Have never existed, for all crabs and beetles know.
All that is left is a silent blue planet lazying in the sun. If the sun is up and there’s no one to feel it’s warmth, is it still hot?


Story written for @mariannewest's freewrite challenge. Today's prompt was: burning! Check out her blog and join our freewrite community.

Thanks for reading!

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Very interesting question you pose (my answer is, yep, but does it matter, nope), and a well-painted picture of a world without mankind. There's a peace to it, a sense of other life going on as it should, and yet, there's something lost. No way to mark time, deed, or place. Perhaps it is the totality of tranquility that engenders solitude. Yet, the storms will rage, and the sands will burn, and so on.

Very good. :)

You're welcome. Does this also mean I understood well enough what you were saying? I might sound authoritative or something but sometimes I'm thinking out loud while wrapping my mind around what I'm reading and probably should just ask a question rather than all statements. :)

Yes, I think you're right. All the other species are better at adapting than us - at least how we are today - so they'd be fine no matter the weather...
Yet, rather than seeking an answer, I was more fascinated with the idea of the world going on without us. I sometimes get this feeling while looking at an old tree who's been here way before me and will still be there when I'm gone.... or the sea, for that matter.

Very good. So the idea of longevity if not immortality. I guess if something outlives us, like a tree, it doesn't have to be immortal, but we can look at it as something more than ourselves. Something lasting, like the sea.

Okay, well, I'm glad I asked about intent. I like it, exploring the idea of timeless nature continuing on, before us and after us. :)

I thought about weaving in the idea that even our sun is expected to die some day, but it's so far in the future we're talking immortality here. Ultimately, it's about life going on without us - as persons or as a species.

I really liked all the imagery you wrote in this. I could hear the beetles and see the scurry of people so clearly with their lost flip flops!

I'm also here to throw you #hotpotato for the #over20club! I'm not sure if you've already had it once, so I apologize if you have!

Thanks, but no thanks!
I got rid of it!!

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