You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Wild West - Part 26 - 5 minute freewrite challengeView the full contextmariannewest (71)in #freewrite • 7 years ago You know that I like the chapter idea :)
Better get these bad boys to sleep then :P
They've had enough whiskey, so they might just fall asleep at the table haha :D
I love how you always throw the whiskey and bourbon in there. It gives them so much more character. I loved this! Getting all caught up!!!
Exactly! I feel like it somewhat represents their torment, their desire to let go of all the pain they feel inside... Not an easy task to live with yourself after you've deserted your family and killed hundreds of people.... I guess.
Thanks! :D
Happy to have you on board! :D
I would say less letting go, and more masking, wouldn't you?
Ahh, yes, you worded it much better!
Masking it is! ^^