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RE: Trying to Get a Clue: The Hunted (Serialized Suspense, Part 9)
This is more scary that I thought. No monsters, no horror atmposphere, but a well built tension in the way you put sentence after sentence and never show actually the source of this fear, that for what we could know until now, can be only a joke of the protagonist's mind.
It should be interesting to learn the truth behind it all. I'm so curious that it's actually quite difficult not to just keep writing until the story is done each day! Thank you for the comment. I'm glad that I'm managing to capture the fear and tension, even with the unknown!