Ooze - 5 Minute Freewrite Day 28
Ooze
Snooze
after booze,
I want to looze
myself in an abooze
of my brain, without an excooze.
At the bottom of my head, ooze
the thoughts, so confooze-d,
I abooze
them once again, I have no mooze
for my poem, no cerooze
for my face, in this obtooze
recital, words are fooze-d,
they drip in the drooze
of my broken soul, soft berceooze
to my decay.
I'm full of ooze
of past mistakes mashed together and reclooze
for my own perooze,
so I can reooze
them once again with a new rooze
of mine. What a pathetic, contooze,
abstrooze
human being I am.
This post is part of the 5 Minute Freewrite Contest, or better the "5 minute freewrite, plus countless trying to find a bizarre pic in my files, plus some other for writing these lines contest"
Thanks to @mariannewest and @improv for planning this contest and providing immense fun to my strange mind.
The picture in this post was taken by and belong to me. It represents a significative piece of art from an exhibition I visited in Sa Llotja, Palma de Mallorca, in Summer 2014.
Thanks for reading! If you liked, please let an upvote, a comment or a resteem.
Wow, I need to hear that to music or as a dramatic reading. I read it as Hip Hop. 😎 😀
Thank you, in my head I was doing a poetry slam! :D
And thank you to you for providing such fun reading for us!!! And thank you for visiting and commenting on so many posts. Love it!!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-29-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-great-grandpa-s-nose
You slammed that freewrite like with swag
I love this community! Following :)
Wow i wanted to say, "like a pro" but refrained for some odd reason...then I clicked you to follow and saw you call yourself an "amateur" . What? Don't shortchange yourself. You are an expert (in case pro means something else to you, words are freaky like that)
@creationofcare ..@marcoriccardi is a born storyteller, said It plain and to the point he could tranquilly write a successful book, he's Italian and his written English, for how good it can seem, is only a pale idea of his literary skills in his original language. Marco is one of the (few) people in this world that could be a Stephen King, but in a way or another are just a broken john doe (just like me, the broken not the writer). He would deserve 10000 SP delegated and this steemit thing would be a better place, but it will never happen.
Naaah
Thank you very much!
I call myself an "amateur", because it means "lover". 😉
Perfect!
Only 15 cents for this masterpiece is an abooze! Yo! :-P
When I'll be a whale, I'll be a huge stoopid sperm whale, writing silly rubbish for thousands BSMD...ehm, SBD.
Hahaha I want thousand of BSMD tokens too! I will publish photos of kittens / boobs / kittens with boobs / boobs with kittens and make videos where I sconsacrate and insult a guitar with musical blasphemities that would make Ozzy blush. I will be upvoted 30 sbd for a burp and everyone will write very long and deep comments hoping for an upvote...oh wait, but this is not a joke, it's happening!
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Nice, you got a 15.0% @futuristgear upgoat, thanks to @marcoriccardi
It consists of $0.01 vote and $0.0 curation
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