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RE: The Truth | Lola's Story Part 29 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: travel
Soooo good! Loooove the dialogue. But more importantly, I'm loving the inner monologue.
Soooo good! Loooove the dialogue. But more importantly, I'm loving the inner monologue.
Thank you so much! And thank you for the feedback on the inner dialogue...I had my doubts about it flowing correctly.
Also...would you like me to add you to the list of readers so that when the next part comes out you're notified?