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RE: Mark's envelope | Lola's Story Part 28 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: wire
I have obviously not read every chapter, but just the 2 I've read, I can tell you really know your characters. It's just like you said in PYPT today. They sort of "tell" you what you need to do with them next. I love how you develop the dialogue and the subtext. It really flows. I could learn a thing or two from you!
Wow! Thank you! It's crazy how in some stories, the characters don't come to life as easily...and others just appear as easy as breathing. Amd thank you on the compliment about dialogue! That's an area I've been trying to develop. When I first started they sounded like robots! Haha
So, I'm trying my hand at a second series...because why not haha...and I wonder if it will be the same with the characters. If you have a second...and I'm not sure who does ...let me know what you think! Stranded 1 and Stranded 2.
Yay! She started the "Stranded" series, I'll check out the part 2 now. I Love You Mucho @freedomtowrite.
I'm so glad you're excited!