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RE: Impossible - a stream of consciousness poem for Freewrite # 189: cane
Another great write Bennet, I feel like I'm getting a sense of your poetic style now and I have to say its very engaging. Reminds me a little of Andrei Codrescu - check out his poem 'Against Meaning' if you get the chance, I think you'd dig it :)
The third section of this piece really grabbed me, its surreal and slightly teasing imagery just commands attention.
Hah! Thank you, spot on recommendation, I loved reading this.
"especially when I have to confirm
the obvious which always
sits on a little table and draws a lot
of attention to itself."
XD
Glad you enjoyed this piece. The pomegranate part was a last minute addition. I like that it leaves so much unsaid.