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in #freewrite6 years ago

Are the bruised stems of poisonous lilies,
I picked a stalk from your abandoned Chinese-themed garden,
not gone because you are aloof, but because you are burned to ash,
or, settled to bed by great-grands under the cover of dense loam?

Today, the low clouds are as heavy as the lead weights we held and strung,
before casting off the edge of our rocking rowboat while fishing for King salmons.
What once stood, mid-century riches with sprawling decks, lined in red and pink, rhododendron, the steep drive you took such care to smear with sticky asphalt each spring,

are all up for auction, some far-flung day a vending, we all must face.
But never does the idea of hawking our isolation congeal into a thought of real, reality,
though we all discuss the trueness of it. For a time, the stellar jays will continue,
searching your abandoned feeders,

neighborhood children will scream against the wind, without your even being here,
the rest of the world light as flying feathers.
There too is the lion-knocker, the knocked over pergola, the blue stain of glass,
the parquet floors, yet your gold fish are gone,

your silk fans sold, and your Samsonite train-case claimed by a stranger.

Photo Credit: https://www.moneden.fr/article/amaryllis-belladonna

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Such a beautiful poem @kimberlylane. I nominated you for my favorite poem today. Loved it. 👏

Ohhh you kill me!!
your gold fish are gone, your silk fans sold, and your Samsonite train-case claimed by a stranger.
And this is fantastic - neighborhood children will scream against the wind, without your even being here,
the rest of the world light as flying feathers.
Wow!
Oh, the lion, the lion, you kill me again and again:
There too is the lion-knocker, the knocked over pergola...**
I mentioned my sister wanting to tear down our childhood home and force our 80+ yr old parents into a new house on the remote farm. Now I wish I'd written to the prompt - remote - yet for a small number of people, it's home. It's iconic. My sister the wrecking ball...

Thank you again for your accolades and encouragement!
For whatever reason my format was screwed up in the line breaks, but the words are still all there and glad it still packed a punch.
Sister's as wrecking balls, now there's a prompt!

It's touching how your poem embraces a whole world. Things that have passed in one person's life live on elsewhere. And that which has died serves as something alive. The circular, the interacting, sometimes with great delay ... you offer a view that needs only a few words and yet says so much.

Thank you, Erika!

An amazing poem with beautiful imagery!

Congratulations. You are featured at the Freewrite House
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@freewritehouse/poetry-digest-23

Truly makes my day!

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