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RE: It was June | Lola's Story Part 42 | 5 minute freewrite ~Prompt: bath
Really enjoyed reading:) Great details, her looking at chipped green paint, straps of her purple dress and garlic sauce!
Really enjoyed reading:) Great details, her looking at chipped green paint, straps of her purple dress and garlic sauce!
Thank you! This was definitely one of those parts that I reread and felt I could've done better, but if I edit too much then it's not a freewrite. So your compliment came at a great time, thank you!
Funny how things work that way. You're a great writer so glad I was able to lift you on a day you might be forgetting :)
Awww! Thank you! I am very glad you were able to lift my spirits!